Saturday, October 29, 2011

Guest Blog by J.N. Duncan and Giveaway - October 29, 2011

How Characters Can Surprise You

First off, I'd like to thank Qwill for having me on today to help support the release of my dark, urban fantasy (or as I like to call it: supernatural crime fiction), The Vengeful Dead, second in my Deadworld series. It's the follow-up to Deadworld, chronicling the adventures (or misadventures as the case may be), of one troubled FBI agent, Jackie Rutledge, as she attempts to figure out herself as well as how to deal with things not quite living anymore. As one might expect, when dealing with a messed up character involved in a world where crazy things are afoot, things do not always go as planned. In short, they surprise you.

Now, I'll readily admit that I'm a plotter. I lay out my stories from start to finish before I put down word one. It's just the way my brain works, otherwise I find myself meandering all over the place, not sure where things are going, and inevitably end up stuck somewhere along the way. I also lay out my character arcs for the story, in rather broad brushstrokes, giving me goals of where my main characters are heading emotionally and a few key points along the way. While it would certainly be easier if this process cemented things in stone and gave me a rock solid path to follow from start to finish, it never works out that way. Mostly, this occurs because either I realize that something in the plot doesn't work as planned, i.e. it makes no logical sense as a progression from what happened before, or as is often the case, the characters, it turns out, wouldn't do what I'd planned.

I suspect much of this has to do with what one wants characters to do versus what they really would do in a given situation. I've had numerous occasions where I've reached a particular plot point, an element I needed for something else to happen next, and the character, usually Jackie, has another, preferable option. When you have a character with a fragile state of mind that is being battered about on a fairly continual basis, they tend to become unreliable. They don't always want to do what makes sense at the time. The result: a change in the story, an unexpected direction, and perhaps a new facet of character one had not seen before.

This is one of the more enjoyable aspects of writing. As much as one might plan out and think ahead, stories still surprise. You can't force story elements on to your character's profile. As much as you may want them to do something, a story will fall flat and feel forced if you wedge your characters into convenient actions and emotional reactions. You may want anger in response to a situation and find fear instead or perhaps plan for lust only to find hesitancy or rejection. Much like life, things do not always go as planned, and as a writer, you have to play along and be true to life.

In the case of my series, things can become difficult with a character like Jackie. She is not happy with her life or herself and definitely does not have a fondness for the supernatural elements that have invaded her life. She was a woman of routine, who focused singularly on the one thing she was good at (catching bad guys) at the expense of everything else, because she could not stand to face them. In a series with a major thread involving her growth, which must in some ways, continue to move forward, she fights me every step of the way. I give her opportunities to move forward, to shed a little light upon her darkness, and she will continue to hide in the dark. Things must happen in a natural way, otherwise I feel the story is fake, and healing from emotional difficulties is not easy in real life and should not be in fiction either. One magical little night with the hero does not fix all ills (I over generalize here). Some readers have complained that Jackie continues to be frustrating in her lack of growth. The time frame however, of the first two books is about six weeks. People don't "fix" things in such a short matter of time, and Jackie will be no exception. I don't want it to be easy for her, but I do want her to succeed in the end. She just continues to surprise me and conspire to thwart my efforts to make her healthy once again. I'm not worried though, she'll get there eventually, whether she likes it or not.

And for taking the time to read and comment here on the topic, one random commenter will receive a signed copy of The Vengeful Dead and coverflat for book three, The Lingering Dead, due out in April.

About the Deadworld Series

The Vengeful Dead
Deadworld 2
Kensington, October 4, 2011
Mass Market Paperback, 352 pages

She's the FBI's go-to expert on Chicago's most brutal supernatural crimes. But a bloodthirsty, revenge-crazed killer is using her deepest fears as a terrifying weapon . . .

Jackie Rutledge just can't put her past to rest. Her Bureau partner is dead, but not gone. And her sanity is becoming as fragile as her career. Worst of all, a wrenching journey into Deadworld has given her unwanted new abilities-and exhuming memories she hoped to keep buried . . .

Now a merciless force capable of possessing humans is on a killing spree, destroying the guilty and innocent alike. It isn't long before Jackie is a prime suspect, struggling to stay two steps ahead of her savvy new partner, and her undead P.I. and paramour, Nick. But to clear her name, she'll have to take on her greatest challenge yet: confronting an inner darkness as inescapable as the one she hunts-and capable of annihilating more than her soul . . .

Deadworld 1
Kensington, April 5, 2012
Mass Market Paperback, 352 pages

She’s as tough as anything haunting Chicago’s streets. But to deal with an inhuman power that won’t stay buried, this FBI agent needs help that comes at an immortal price…

Jackie Rutledge has seen her share of supernatural killers. But her latest murder case is what recurring nightmares are made of. Brutally exsanguinated human victims, vanishing-into-the-ether evidence, and a city on the edge of panic mean that she and her psychic partner, Laurel, are going to need more than just backup …

So Jackie is fine with any help rugged P.I. Nick Anderson can give—even if that includes the impish ghost and sexy vampire who make up his team. But Nick is hiding secrets of his own. And Jackie’s investigation has plunged them both into a vengeful game reaching back centuries—and up against a malevolent force hungry for more than just victory…

Coming in 2012

The Lingering Dead
Deadworld 3
Kensington, April 3, 2012
Mass Market Paperback

She cracks the FBI’s toughest supernatural crimes, from Chicago’s windy streets and beyond, into the next world. But a malevolent force now has her reputation—and her team—in its sights…

Jackie Rutledge has faced down everything from the darkest sorcery to uber-vengeful revenants. But heading up the Bureau’s special paranormal unit is presenting unexpected challenges. Handling otherworldly egos and politics has never come easy to this loner agent. And opening up to her sexy vampire lover, Nick, is as unnerving as her unwanted new ability to slip between the realms of the living and the dead...

Now an insidious power holding helpless ghosts in thrall is using any means necessary to discredit Jackie and split her team apart for good. The only chance she has means baiting the terrifying Deadworld being stalking her dreams, hunting her every step—and growing ever more hungry for her ultimate sacrifice…

About J.N.

J.N. Duncan is a father of four and an aspiring teacher, living in Ohio. He's got as many pets as kids, and a partner who is published as well (romance author Tracy Madison). He's a big fantasy gamer, sf/f geek, lover of astronomy, and generally scores pretty high on the nerd scale, if one were to measure such things.

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The Giveaway


What:  One commenter will win a a signed copy of The Vengeful Dead and a coverflat for book three, The Lingering Dead, due out in April 2012. US and Canadian Mailing Addresses Only.

How:  Leave a comment about J.N. Duncan's post.

You may receive additional entries by:

1)  Being a Follower of The Qwillery.

2)  Mentioning the giveaway on Facebook and/or Twitter. Even if you mention the giveaway on both, you will get only one additional entry. You get only one additional entry even if you mention the giveaway on Facebook and/or Twitter multiple times.

3)  Mentioning the giveaway on your on blog or website. It must be your own blog or website; not a website that belongs to someone else or a site where giveaways, contests, etc. are posted.

There are a total of 4 entries you may receive: Comment (1 entry), Follower (+1 entry), Facebook and/or Twitter (+ 1 entry), and personal blog/website mention (+1 entry). This is subject to change again in the future for future giveaways.

Please leave links for Facebook, Twitter, or blog/website mentions. In addition please leave a way to contact you.

Who and When:  The contest is open to all humans on the planet earth with a US or Canadian mailing address. Contest ends at 11:59pm US Eastern Time on Saturday, November 5, 2011. Void where prohibited by law. You must be 18 years old or older to enter.

*Giveaway rules are subject to change.*


  1. I enjoyed the post. I have Deadworld and look forward in continuing this series.

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  2. this book looks awesome! i havent read book one but its been added to my TBR list.. would love to win, thanks for the great contest

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  3. Very interesting... I love the covers :)

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  4. I'm always amazed at authors who are pantsters rather than plotters, mainly because I'm a huge control freak. Even if you start out with an outline, though, I do believe the characters will evolve and your outline will change! This sounds like a really interesting series - I can't wait to check it out!

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  5. I'm adding this series on my want to read list. I like that it has a strong protagonist.

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  6. I would love to win, thank you for the awesome chance! I haven't had the chance to read these yet.
    GFC Krystal Larson

  7. the cover and the story sounds great but.. is US only so don't count me in u_u

  8. I'm always looking for new series to read, sounds good!

  9. This series sounds like one I have to read. It sounds sooo good! And I love the book covers.
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  10. The books look sooo flippin awesome :) I havnt read the books, but I have heard about them, and I cant wait until I get my hands on them.

  11. Thank you so much for the post, I really love the insight to writing and character development.

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  12. I enjoyed the post and I've heard other authors talk about how their characters have a mind of their own. I always find that fascinating. I loved Deadworld and I'm looking forward to reading The Vengeful Dead.

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  13. This series sounds interesting, thanks for hosting the giveaway. I'm a GFC follower as well.


  14. I have not read this but now I do want to.
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  15. I like how you described your writing process. It sounds like how I would go about it if I were to ever start writing a book/series.
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  16. I love the titles of your books, as well as the pics of kick ass heroines!
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  17. Wow... Awesome covers! I've not read any books by J. N. Duncan, but now I must... Thanks for the awesome giveaway!

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  18. ooohh, this looks like a great new series!!! Cannot wait to get started, thanks for the chance to win

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  19. I love it when characters surprise the maker. :)

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  20. I'm always surprised to read that an author is surprised by the turns a character or plot take considering the author is the one who decides what will happen. I guess that shows I'm not an author in the making.

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  21. I think this book looks so exciting!!! Well I really like the sounds of the whole series! Going on the wishlist right now, Xmas is right around the corner! Thanks for the chance.

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